Friday, February 9, 2018

A Scar

A scar can tell you where I was

A scar can tell you where I’ve been

A scar can tell you when to fight

A scar can tell you when to end

A scar can tell you many things 

But NOT what I am

- Darcy

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

I love this poem! I really enjoy the way you used a rhyme.

Anonymous said...

Wow, this is ana amazing post! I could feel the voice you were using, it was also very dramatic which is great for readers! Nice job!

Anonymous said...

Amazing

Anonymous said...

This makes perfect sence

Anonymous said...

I like how this is really dramatic because of the red font, but at the same time, if it was in blue, or yellow, it could be saying the same thing in a different way. I also like how you had it rhyme at the end!

Anonymous said...

I really like how you inform us what a scar can do. It also can inform us that you have been through a lot